Backstory: Two Lives Stretched Out Before Them

A Q&A with Janel Comeau, Quantum Shorts finalist

Read the story: Two Lives Stretched Out Before Them

Can you give a short introduction of yourself?

I’m Canadian, currently living in Halifax, Nova Scotia. I’ve mostly been doing comedy writing. I write for The Beaverton, and wrote for Cracked.com about ten years ago. I have only recently started doing fiction. In my day job, I work in social services, working with homeless youth.

 

What made you decide to try quantum physics writing from comedy writing?

I’ve always had a love for science, technology and science fiction. When I was in university studying computer science, I had taken some particle physics and quantum physics courses. I also had a professor who worked on the CERN collider who was very passionate about the topic. When I came across Quantum Shorts in a list of short story contests someone had compiled, I was intrigued by the concept. I read some of the past stories and thought they were cool. Even though I’m not doing science for a living now, I realised that I’ve retained more than I thought I did from my undergraduate days.

 

There is some ambiguity at the end of your story. How did you come up with the idea?

I started thinking about what I know about quantum physics that translates easily into a story, especially because this contest has a short word limit. The two things I really remembered were superposition and the observer effect, fairly accessible concepts that I understand well enough to put into a story.

 

I also really like stories with a really uncertain ending. In school, I studied a famous story from the 19th century called “The Lady, or the Tiger?”. It is a Frank Stockton short story where a woman has to choose whether to feed her lover to a tiger or let him marry another woman. You don’t find out what she chooses. The story really stuck with me and I liked this idea of combining an uncertain ending with quantum superposition and the observer effect.

 

Did you have to refresh your memory about quantum physics?

I did take some time to watch YouTube. The channel Kurzgesagt has a few videos on quantum science, and I watched other introduction 101 videos. I think the beauty of quantum physics is that we don’t really know how a lot of it works so you can kind of get away with not knowing.

 

What was your writing process like?

I knew that I wanted to go with a very human angle on the story. I was also a big fan of teen dystopian stories like Divergent and The Hunger Games. I thought it would be interesting to write a story where a quantum computer is making a large decision for somebody and seeing whether the characters feel that they can influence that. I wrote most of it in one sitting, coming up to about 1500 words. The main process was trimming it down and realising the story works better when I devoted more time to the characters grappling with the implications of what’s going on.

 

What is your favourite science-inspired book?

I’m a fan of The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy. The science is almost intentionally absurd. I also love The Martian. That is kind of the opposite and the science is almost painstakingly realistic. I like a variety of these stories and always like to see the human angle.

 

What does being a Quantum Shorts finalist mean to you?

It’s very validating because while this was one contest I wanted to apply to, I thought I had no chance given the size of the contest. So I’m blown away to be shortlisted. It’s a little intimidating to have people who’ve made careers out of quantum physics judge something I wrote, but it is so cool to see the blend of artists and scientists on the judging panel.

 

Anything else you would like to tell us about yourself or your story?

This was a really cool opportunity to explore something I normally wouldn’t have written about and to find a human angle in these abstract ideas of quantum physics. It was a fun exercise to broaden my horizons a little bit and see that quantum physics doesn’t have to be something accessible only to a few select people.